tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1887055429481495116.post231534860301663543..comments2023-11-02T08:26:08.765-07:00Comments on Yes, This Will Be On The Test Leslie S. Rose: The Writer's Voice - Moon Strings by Leslie S. RoseLeslie S. Rosehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17122865337924270039noreply@blogger.comBlogger39125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1887055429481495116.post-3222713816393475952013-05-10T06:20:24.640-07:002013-05-10T06:20:24.640-07:00Holy frick, this is awesome! I want to read the re...Holy frick, this is awesome! I want to read the rest desperately!! Meradeth Houstonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06741790047121063893noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1887055429481495116.post-33344812759888727552013-05-09T20:18:37.752-07:002013-05-09T20:18:37.752-07:00Wow. You start off with a bang. I'm curious ab...Wow. You start off with a bang. I'm curious about what happens next. That first line is a great hooker.Suzihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16502606950280751205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1887055429481495116.post-78026523699316926022013-05-09T18:38:20.726-07:002013-05-09T18:38:20.726-07:00Didn't I comment on yours already? Must have g...Didn't I comment on yours already? Must have gotten eaten! Love all the jargon and specificity in your worldbuilding.Angelica R. Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09448717076699744259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1887055429481495116.post-60182918297388826792013-05-09T18:03:21.657-07:002013-05-09T18:03:21.657-07:00Love it! Our MCs have a lot of similarities which ...Love it! Our MCs have a lot of similarities which is super cool. Best of luck to you too!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03681031636806544583noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1887055429481495116.post-41689198700915049552013-05-09T05:07:41.389-07:002013-05-09T05:07:41.389-07:00Very nice! Excellent tension in the first lines a...Very nice! Excellent tension in the first lines and love the world building! Good luck, this looks like a fun read!<br /><br />--Suzanne<br />www.suzannewarr.comSuzanne Warrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15141459404743769260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1887055429481495116.post-89747236884526803332013-05-08T07:51:58.003-07:002013-05-08T07:51:58.003-07:00Wow...this looks awesome! What an intriguing first...Wow...this looks awesome! What an intriguing first paragraph!<br /><br /><a href="http://fromsarahwithjoy.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Sarah Allen<br />(From Sarah With Joy)</a><br />Sarah Allenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01185278849400551014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1887055429481495116.post-45436248141620952112013-05-07T23:21:56.447-07:002013-05-07T23:21:56.447-07:00Great query and 250 :)Great query and 250 :)Courtney Moyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10998699567054830823noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1887055429481495116.post-23650208882064439042013-05-07T15:40:53.453-07:002013-05-07T15:40:53.453-07:00Love the feel of this science fiction! Full of emo...Love the feel of this science fiction! Full of emotion and detail. Love that Melly has a different vision than everyone's expectations!Margo Berendsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03476308235642890474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1887055429481495116.post-71444502601358349712013-05-07T12:26:29.216-07:002013-05-07T12:26:29.216-07:00Great concept! Love the intro! Good luck!Great concept! Love the intro! Good luck!Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09413714094858463770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1887055429481495116.post-79902955023705935712013-05-07T05:09:02.768-07:002013-05-07T05:09:02.768-07:00This sounds like an AMAZING read. Best of luck to ...This sounds like an AMAZING read. Best of luck to you!!Natalie Thornehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02706713215012130751noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1887055429481495116.post-46827071712855448102013-05-06T20:11:40.271-07:002013-05-06T20:11:40.271-07:00You know I'm a fan. :DYou know I'm a fan. :D Lisa Gail Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03648323153868702165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1887055429481495116.post-88526068304144627542013-05-06T19:05:14.440-07:002013-05-06T19:05:14.440-07:00What a wonderful start! I love that first line- it...What a wonderful start! I love that first line- it is so powerful and intriguing. I so enjoyed the excerpt. Yeah! Best of luck. ;)<br />~JessDMShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04202502753961748992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1887055429481495116.post-31168054738090082222013-05-06T14:31:35.890-07:002013-05-06T14:31:35.890-07:00Super writing, Leslie. Congratulations.Super writing, Leslie. Congratulations.cleemckenziehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15456109243453726483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1887055429481495116.post-11368909670729413062013-05-06T12:09:32.962-07:002013-05-06T12:09:32.962-07:00Hi! I don't read much sci-fi, but this sounds ...Hi! I don't read much sci-fi, but this sounds so imaginative. Such creative words (cloudbird? connectik communicator?) and I love the idea of a tri-planetary science competition. Sounds great, so good luck! p.s. I absolutely love the name of your website. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12630132306709692520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1887055429481495116.post-78589616075855279302013-05-05T20:29:23.197-07:002013-05-05T20:29:23.197-07:00WOW everyone. Your encouraging words really touch ...WOW everyone. Your encouraging words really touch my heart. Thank you so much.Leslie S. Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17122865337924270039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1887055429481495116.post-35803516596288828722013-05-05T14:31:08.592-07:002013-05-05T14:31:08.592-07:00LR - you know I'm a fan of your work. :DLR - you know I'm a fan of your work. :Dstaceyleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16363952695704171436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1887055429481495116.post-85398560363667223422013-05-05T14:01:10.950-07:002013-05-05T14:01:10.950-07:00I love the first line of your 250! And a smart sci...I love the first line of your 250! And a smart science girl for a MC - way to go!Bodhihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10913168110694071011noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1887055429481495116.post-60660821070981533602013-05-04T20:15:29.347-07:002013-05-04T20:15:29.347-07:00I'm glad your MC wants to save the earth and n...I'm glad your MC wants to save the earth and not fight it....since I rather like living here :)Melissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12096764010151024050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1887055429481495116.post-88748128727444324212013-05-04T16:08:10.645-07:002013-05-04T16:08:10.645-07:00Love this! You've got a beautiful voice and it...Love this! You've got a beautiful voice and it draws me right into your world! Good luck!!Jemi Fraserhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02214408467456320167noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1887055429481495116.post-33235188850920393742013-05-04T14:05:15.759-07:002013-05-04T14:05:15.759-07:00Some interesting worldbuilding going here. I'd...Some interesting worldbuilding going here. I'd def read on to see how far you push it. G'luck! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1887055429481495116.post-35818048030085088612013-05-04T12:06:03.079-07:002013-05-04T12:06:03.079-07:00Good Luck Leslie! *fingers crossed*
What an opport...Good Luck Leslie! *fingers crossed*<br />What an opportunity!!Michelle Wallacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02750092836481599870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1887055429481495116.post-27742949091348188162013-05-04T12:05:03.390-07:002013-05-04T12:05:03.390-07:00I love the title Moonstrings!
Ad Mellylora is such...I love the title Moonstrings!<br />Ad Mellylora is such a quaint name... too cute!Michelle Wallacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02750092836481599870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1887055429481495116.post-33939816444661918182013-05-04T11:29:33.026-07:002013-05-04T11:29:33.026-07:00Glad to see some science fiction! This sounds grea...Glad to see some science fiction! This sounds great.<br />Best of luck!Diana Sousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15483039479640784936noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1887055429481495116.post-23541144734699434602013-05-03T23:14:54.735-07:002013-05-03T23:14:54.735-07:00Good luck Leslie! This sounds awesome.Good luck Leslie! This sounds awesome.Elizabeth Briggshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14572251749088056704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1887055429481495116.post-45211532049322110882013-05-03T17:59:47.604-07:002013-05-03T17:59:47.604-07:00Great 250, definitely caught my interest. Best of...Great 250, definitely caught my interest. Best of luck. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05597429319219431167noreply@blogger.com